As you enter Niva, you will feel the wind of fear and sadness, and you will see hundred of monkeys shooting watermelons just for the purpose of getting it and shooting it again. As you walk up on the stairs, you will feel the pressure giving off from each foot steps, and you will hear an echoing from the wall that says, "Let's have fun dying together!!!"
In front of some classroom, you might see an iguana setting their crest, with a 999 x 530 cm mirror on the other hand. Pressure starts to disappear as you heard the footsteps of your penguin friends, carrying 10 kg books, heading to you, and greet you with a big smile, and the first sentence of the day will be, "What was our homeworks yesterday?" After some time, you will see that there will be a group of penguin lying down on the floor, rushing on their homeworks. This is what we do everyday at Niva, and it seeps in our blood, the blood of Niva students!
By: Monrada Juycharoen (Jane) 9L
I don't get any comment on my grammar, so I didn't change anything in my essay. One of my friend that check my essay said that the sentece about the iguana is not really clear to her, but to me, I think it's clear enough to be understand so I didn't change it either.
ReplyDeleteJENIMON!!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE your essay, it's all true! Especially the iguana and homework part. hahahaa ((:
But Jane, most of the time you forgot or you put extra 'S',like "hundred of monkeys shooting watermelons" should be 'hundreds'..
But it's AWESOME! RAWRR! <3