Iphone is and BB which one is better?
From most people right now are using BB more than I phone
There is both good and bad things for both of them i'm to tell
the good thing for them first.
Iphone have a good property than BB. ( From my own thinking.)
Iphone have a application to work when u are on a vacation with ur family
It's make u fell on so lonely cause it make u have more fun with game.
It can send a e-mail to another person easily.
BB have alot of people using it right now at Thailand and USA
BB can send a work faster than Iphone cause they have there own internet.
BB can chat faster than iphone. (BB is like a mini computer to do staff.)
Now most people who work already who use BB to contact each other.
Bad thing about the Two item is Iphone cannot send some important file.
BB when u delete a message all the message that u save will be all gone.
Both Iphone and BB can and use the thing that computer have.
Most people buy BB and Iphone because they want to have for fashion look.
I recommend everybody to use Iphone.
Done by: Archanun Seyayongka (Aib)
Grade: 9L
Haloooo~!!! You are improving Aibby!!! ^^ The format, grammar, and vocabs are a little bit wrong, but anyway, you are improving!!! ~ ^O^
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ReplyDeleteit's not perfect like they said,like you write 'u' instead of 'you'. But you are improving man! Keep up the goos work!!(: